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这是我大二时初开始写作的作品,确实人称上不是太清晰,谢谢指教。该用户表示中立"); document.write("
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什么啦!有的语言是很优美啦!但是可不可以用一个人称!什么又是主人公,又是作者,又是读者!郁闷!不想看啦!该用户表示中立"); document.write("
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